Special New Referrer's Discount for May 3 Academic Writing
Introduce the Academic Writing
Club to a friend, and you each get a discount!
It's time to start thinking about who you know who could benefit from
the Writing Club. This is your chance to give them the opportunity to try
the Club and get $10 off, while getting a $10 refund of your own. This
applies to both current members and those who have never been a member
-- so find a buddy and sign up together. Just ask your friend to
enter the word "REFER" into the coupon code in the shopping
and also tell them to enter *your* name (the referrer) into
the comment box at the bottom
of the page, so you will get your refund after you sign up yourself. If
you're already a member, you will be sent a $10 refund, too! Tell your
friend, colleague, or student to go to http://academicwritingclub.com now
Stop Pussyfooting around and Just Say It!
The most common reason for people to join the Academic Writing Club or request
coaching is that they are stuck, confused and overwhelmed by their writing
projects. I'm sure you've felt this at times – you
have a sense of what you want to write, but you just can't seem to get
it "on paper."
So in coaching, I use a simple technique – I ask them to explain it
to me. Luckily, I rarely know anything about their field, so they are
forced to explain it to an intelligent layperson (pardon the bragging) in words
that leave out jargon and get right to the point. Often, while they are
explaining, I just type every single word they say. When they're
done, invariably there are two results. The most frequent result is that
my client suddenly says something along the lines of "I can't believe
it – that's it! I just discovered what my point really is!" The
other possible result is that I tell them I've typed out what they just
said and I offer to email it to them immediately. About half the people
take me up on this, (the other half feel so strongly that the "truth" has
been revealed to them that they don't need it). Those who select
to have me email them my notes often find them useful in making the points
in their own writing – after all, these were their own words, verbatim!
So what is going on here? Why does explaining your work at a point
where you are stuck help you gain clarity? I have some thoughts on this,
but not definitive answers. Perhaps some of you have ideas about why
this works; that's why I'm going to put this article in my blog,
so that you can put in your ideas and comments.
Why does explaining your work to a layperson help?
- You momentarily forget what "the experts" might say. By
stripping away all the confusion caused by the possible objections that a
person in your field would have, your "inner editor" can rest
easy, and allow you to talk. After all, how could I, a mere intelligent
layperson, possibly critique the ideas of an expert in their field?
- The change in modality -- that is, talking instead of writing --
might activate a different part of the brain. It's
another way to quiet the inner editor.
- It's harder to edit and second guess yourself when you speak
as opposed to write. This forces you to get to the heart of your
argument more quickly.
- The need to simplify the issues that matter (for the attentive,
listening layperson) helps you get right to the point; again to
drill down to the meat of your argument.
- Those who feel they are not good writers are free to express themselves. Just
the belief that you don't write well can stop you from coming out with
some really good thoughts. So talking bypasses that problem.
In what situations could this technique help you?
- When you're trying to write an abstract. Abstracts are often
difficult to write because you have to weed through all the complex thoughts
that went into the article and again come right to the point. Try
writing your abstract imagining that you're explaining it to a colleague
in a very different field than yours.
- When you're overwhelmed and confused and have lost track of your
- When you can't write what's next and you don't know why. In
this case, the kind of questions you might want to answer would include:
- What are your choices?
- What is getting in the way?
- If you were to write one of those choices, what would you say?
- If you wrote the other choice, what would you say?
Where do you find an intelligent layperson?
This is a tongue-in-cheek question – I'm sure you're surrounded
by them. (Or maybe not – see next section.) The only caveats I
would offer are:
- If you are very self conscious about your work, try to find a non-academic. Academics
are too analytical and critical. No offense.
- Make sure that the person you choose is willing to do this. They
should be willing to ask "dumb questions," because by answering
disingenuous questions, they will force you clarify your argument.
- If possible, find a fast typist and ask them to type what you say.
What if you'd rather do this on your own?
Perhaps your spouse or partner doesn't feel comfortable doing this,
and all your other friends are academics? What if Aunt Mary is hard
of hearing? Here are some suggestions for techniques you could try,
which you could do on your own. These techniques also may silent that inner
critic and help you get to the core of the problem.
- With a clear idea of an intelligent layperson in mind, get out a tape recorder
and talk into it as if you were talking to that person. Then transcribe
what you said.
- Try free writing. I've written about this elsewhere, but here's
a short summary. The idea is that you sit down and start writing about
your conundrum, with the knowledge that your writing is only for your use
and not to be shown to anyone or used in any future work. You can then
write about the problem at hand without worrying how stupid it looks. Try
it first with a timer, giving yourself 10 minutes to get to the point.
Try not to "pussyfoot" around
many academics are hesitant to plant a pole in their little stretch of academic
land and claim it as their own! So they make the reader hunt around
and try to figure out what they really mean. This annoys the reader. A
Come right out and proudly state what your finding or argument is. And
to the extent possible, do this in every paragraph. Of course, coming right
out and saying it also helps you find the flaws in your logic. It's
much better to say it and be clearly wrong, than it is to annoy your reader
and be wrong! Best to get it over with, so you can correct your errors
in logic or statistics and move on. Being fuzzy in your writing won't
make them think that you're brilliant.
You're brilliant – they just might
not know it yet; and you might not know it either.
What if your idea is actually a good one? And your lack of clarity comes
from your reluctance to put it to the test? How unfair to the world,
that this idea is not allowed to see the clear light of day. How unfair
to you, that your brilliance is not being recognized.
One final note
Please don't hide behind "I'm not a good writer" or "Engish
is not my first language." You can hire a developmental editor
such as Claudia Castaneda (firstname.lastname@example.org),
get a copy editor, or hire a professional who specializes in English as a second
language editing. You might find someone who can translate from your
native language. (It's best to find a native English speaker in
that case.) The idea is to…
GET THAT IDEA OUT THERE! And stop pussyfooting around.
© Gina Hiatt, PhD.
Gina is a dissertation and tenure coach. She helps academics, from grad students
wondering about their dissertation topic to faculty members who want to maintain
a high level of research and writing, to reach their goals more quickly and
less painfully. Get Gina's free assessments & ezine at www.academicladder.com
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Hello Academic Ladder!
It's been a long time since I've signed in, but seeing this email reminded
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I joined [the Academic Writing Club] a while ago with NO work done on my dissertation,
I was still studying for comps and writing my prospectus. However, I stuck
with it and remained loyal, and by the end of my time with A.L. I felt as if
I was the one in my group that I had looked at with envy when I had first joined!
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I loved my experience at Academic Ladder and I will definitely be returning
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the University of Colorado, Boulder
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A Big Congratulations to…
Kathryn M. Silva Banks, who successfully defended her Ph.D.
in History at the University of South Carolina, Columbia. She became an Academic Writing
Club member last August, and says that this is what kept her on track. She
will now rejoin as a tenure-track faculty member! This is what the Academic
Writing Club is all about!
She says, "We have nothing like this
in my university and it is a shame because so many people need it. I already
have a few friends who are thinking of using it when they become ABD. I only
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Special Groups Within the Academic Writing Club
There's still room in either of our two new faculty groups in the Club:
1. Faculty Administrators - fitting in writing while
performing all of your administrative work
2. Faculty Parents - fitting in writing
while also being the primary caregiver for young children
Just request either of these groups when you register and sign in.
Quotes of the Month
"I disapprove of what you say, but I will defend to the death
your right to say it."
—Voltaire (1694 - 1778)
"I agree with everything you say, but I would attack to the
death your right to say it."
—Tom Stoppard (1937)
"Take a stand against bland."
"No one can give you permission to assert your authority. You
must claim your own authority."
My Interview with Wandering Educators
Dr. Jessie Voigts interviewed me for the Wandering Educators
am fascinated with the premise of this site: "We are an eclectic group
of global and traveling educators, bent on sharing our passion for travel with
like-minded individuals." I am a wanderer myself, since I can accomplish
my work from anywhere with an Internet connection and a phone, and I travel as
much as possible. We had a great meeting of the minds!
So check out the interview and the
Wandering Educators site!
Book of the Month
Destination Dissertation: A Traveler's Guide to a Done Dissertation by Sonja K. Foss and William Waters. Today
I'm celebrating Chapter 9: "Useful Phrases: Writing and Editing." This
chapter will help you stop pussyfooting around. I especially like their
discussion of what they call "Fast Writing" – that's
a great term. They compare this to their other concept – "Slow
Revising." Love it! They give lots of other meaty hints just
in this chapter. I'd say it's a book well worth getting.
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